Awesome routine

[The Tumbleweed]

Just a new routine I came up with and it gets BIG reactions. I start off with the card version of stigmata, complain how much my wrist hurts and move into fixing it with disjointed, then I say how much it hurt and I think I broke something and get them to check my pulse (control). Any thoughts?? Everytime I do it the crowd goes NUTS

 

[Jakeh]

It seems okay.. at least it flows. And if the people love it, then it's good I suppose!

 

[Sleight_of_Hand]

ending with control is not good cause IMO its a less appealing effect compared to stigmata because one one person can feel the pulse whereas everyone can see the markings on your hand.

 

[ThomasA2]

Very smart. It flows good, and when you are done you have shown a degree of complete body control.

As for the transition from disjointed to "control" I thought about saying:

That was very painful. Sometimes I experiment with my body so I could make things less painful. Here, fell my pulse...

Although I see your perspective is more a random one (something hurts and then something happens, rather than you showing control over it). A lot of different perspectives could be used with a routine like this. It personally fits me better to have control over my body, than everything being random. I like the way you present it though.

 

[Dylan P.]

sounds pretty good. Just I would make sure that you tune up your patter a little bit becuase honestly this is such a good routine that you can seriously play it up with the right story.

 

[The Tumbleweed]

Thanks guys, but I can't really say my patter here because it changes depending on the audience

 

[Jakeh]

Thanks guys, but I can't really say my patter here because it changes depending on the audience

How about an overview of what it is usually? I'd love to hear it.

 

[Dizzi]

For me, instead of saying that it hurts, say that your hand is losing circulation. Maybe you broke a bone which is cutting off a blood vessel.