Come on, you can't really bash the guy for trying. Okay the design isn't all that but give the dude a break.
So far only bad comments have been posted. Let's try and point the fellow in the right direction with creative criticisms.
Let me be the first
Lets see.......................um....................well...........maybe if you......no......(cough)...........
Sorry dude, I tried. Not to be rude or anything, but your design needs more work.
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