Pretty good Mitchell. To be honest, I was pretty entertained watching them, and almost quit when I saw it was 10 minutes long. But, you held my attention for the most part, and the attention of your spectators...they seemed thoroughly entertained.
A few things I noticed from the video...Don't stutter so much, and actually script what you say. I can tell you don't, but you really should. It'll help you immensely, and is not as big a waste of time as you probably think it is.
Another thing...don't move around so much. When you're performing close-up magic in general, a lot is going on in a small amount of space and people are trying to concentrate on what you're doing. By moving around a lot, it can become quite distracting and take away from the magic. I realize the setting your in might have caused some of it, but a good idea (when available) is to find a ledge to perform by, or a table. Like when you were in the area during the first part...that area you set your other decks on. Use that as your "base" and don't stray too far away from that.
Of course, these are just little things I'm saying. My biggest complaint would be you not using any patter with your card in shoe routine, stigmata, and the CIB stuff. I think that the patter you used with the ID helped the overall clearness of it tenfold. VERY easy to follow, but would have been a lot easier if you didn't stutter at times. Really bro, seriously consider scripting your magic.
Oh...and don't think of this as an attack...just trying to help you improve your magic with mistakes I've made and improved on. Been there, done that.
Best.
Steve
