Corruption: My 8 packet display

[caruso]

hey guys:

ok, since i started cardistry 2 months ago, i saw many card displays, lethal ex being my favorite, i also wanted to create a display of my own, so i came up with this, its not a good performance because i finished working on it the morning of that day i filmed,... here it is:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=y7MlXlMo0i8

please tell me what u think, im a noob, and i like my display...
so be honest but not offensive thanks

 

[conjure_pitch]

Personally, I would try to get the hands as downplayed as possible. In my opinion displays come across as much cooler if the focus is on the CARDS whereas in your display the hands seem to obstruct alot it.

Other than that smooth out the execution and you have yourself a decent little display!

 

[EugeneSoh]

well for a 2 month old cardist id say thats pretty clever of you to think of that, but i wouldn't use it for lets say a DVD. but very very creative for a 2 month old.

 

[Johnlawl]

Shouldn't this be in the cardistry section?