Faro Triumph

May 13, 2008
543
1
St Albans, UK
I think you need to delay the spreading of the face down cards at the end. If you do this you will end up with two powerful climaxes.
You don't let the magic sink in after revealing the selection and i think that's why dragon521 feels it is choppy. Let that phase of the effect fully register and then reveal the order of the deck.

Great stuff though.
 
Jun 22, 2008
76
14
earth
That was great!

the only suggestion I can give is do a small display showing that the deck is "in fact, mixed". it would make the ending all the more surprising to a layman.

5/5
 
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