pros: good camerawork, having a moving camera is a good thing, keeps it exciting. your friend Maz is pretty fast with cuts.
cons: very bad variety of moves, mostly just the same things we've seen over and over recently. also no routining. sometimes too zoomed out, when all you're doing is a cut then the only really visually interesting part on the screen is like the size of a postage stamp, zoom in on that stuff!
basically a good idea but way too long. I think you did every single one of jonas' tutorial moves like 3 times in this vid. once would have been cool but it got a bit boring for me, maybe more n00bish members would like it more (i've seen this video a hundred times before)
all in all a good effort for your first group flourish, maybe in the next one try doing some "team moves" like passing packets back and forth in cuts etc? 3/5 stars from me dogg
