Guys this is my second flourishing video after the 1st one. Pls give comments and advice on how to improve my video.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=En3yQIvsX_c
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=En3yQIvsX_c
Flourishing in class
- Thread starter tanlim08
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Lol i feel sad for u. i took this video when i am having free period which means no teachers will be in my class for arnd half an hour.
Haha! The same here, when i do magic on work, I can entertain the whole staff.
My boss hate it ;b
However, I think it's pretty fun.
- Sorry for my english
kickass vid.
positives: you did it uncut and didn't mess around with alot of distracting editing. your cuts were pretty clean for the most part and fast. good springs although... (see negatives) nice steady camerawork and good angle and lighting.
negatives: a bit boring you should have made it a minute long instead of two minutes - not because 2 minutes is the magical "bore" number - but because you used up your material and had to repeat stuff over and over again. The 4 springs in a row, etc, really loses the impact. then ya did a bunch of cuts over again too.
also, learn the Very Long Spring method where you move both your hands when you spring, it looks alot more impressive than if you just hold both hands steady.
3/5 stars from me dogg now get back to studying!
positives: you did it uncut and didn't mess around with alot of distracting editing. your cuts were pretty clean for the most part and fast. good springs although... (see negatives) nice steady camerawork and good angle and lighting.
negatives: a bit boring you should have made it a minute long instead of two minutes - not because 2 minutes is the magical "bore" number - but because you used up your material and had to repeat stuff over and over again. The 4 springs in a row, etc, really loses the impact. then ya did a bunch of cuts over again too.
also, learn the Very Long Spring method where you move both your hands when you spring, it looks alot more impressive than if you just hold both hands steady.
3/5 stars from me dogg now get back to studying!
Wow, not bad at all, the camera was terrible and I didn't like it at all, looked like it was filmed on a cell phone or something, and the background wasn't too good. The moves were very good though, nothing original but I really liked the smoothness and speed of squeeze and things like that. 4/5.