Cringe got my vote.
I honesty dont give a rats a if he did it for live people or not.
But he still did better
Cringe:
Simple effect, direct, straightforward, good. As gustav has said, you rushed and taken away from the potential climax. Slow it down. Other than that, the only other thing which bothered me was the extremely large thumb pull up to get the break.
Jake:
A good effect on its own, but
1. Get a better angle. I dont mind not a HD camera, but it was basically jammed right up there in our face.
2. You slowed the effect down. With all the counting and everything. You got the patter and everything, but youre opposite of Cringe. Speed it up, get to the point.
3. I didnt find the trick climatic enough.