Help with change

[jackofclubs002]

HOw can I improve here is the forum with the link
http://forums.theory11.com/showthread.php?t=7743

 

[Eddie]

You didn't have to make a new thread about it...
The change itself was pretty good though. I think it's fine as it is.

 

[Dylan P.]

I like it. just keep t like it is. nice Work.

 

[RichmanMatthew]

It was very visual. I'm not sure as to how to improve it without the method.