Help With Patter

Feb 11, 2011
5
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Claremore, OK
So I posted this patter on an other forum but no one seems to be responding to it. I also want a wide range of opinions so I'll give T11 a try. I don't know if this effect has a name or if it has been done before. If not, then I claim this trick to be mine for I have created it HAHAHA! Oh well, that said, here it is:

Peer pressure is something that we are all familiar with. You may not believe in it, but you probably have been affected by your peers at one point in your life. Sure it might be good to fit in, but there is always a downside to it. Being like others so that you can fit in will take away from who you really are. You see, here we have a crowd.
*Show deck*
A crowd of people that may be different on the inside, but on the outside they choose to be the same so that they don’t stand out.
*Show back and front of cards from the deck*
However there is always that certain person that stands out. A person who can be picked out of a crowd of many.
*Ask spectator to give me a number*
*Remove cards off the bottom until I arrive to the given number*

Out of a crowd of many you picked this one person. It must be a special person, but what is it that makes him special? Let's find out...
*Riffle Shuffle Deck*
Here is a group of five people.
*Pick Five cards off the bottom (picked card is included in the five) Set the packet aside*
*Pick up deck*

This group of five, like the others might look different on the outside, but are the same on the inside.
*Cut deck in half showing front and back of the two cuts*
*Set deck aside, pick up packet*

Our special person is one of these five, but he is different in many ways. Unlike the others he decided to break away from common mentality and thus defeated peer pressure.
*Show group of five cards and reveal that picked card is not there anymore*
Those are the special people.
*Spread facedown deck to reveal face up picked card*
The people, who out of a crowd of many, can be easily picked out.
*Turn card facedown to reveal different color back from the rest*
 
Nov 19, 2010
125
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sounds alot like the biddle trick but to hard to be sure from just reading and the patter seems great
 
Feb 11, 2011
5
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Claremore, OK
I made this trick after a week of studying from a book called "Counts, Cuts, Moves and Subtleties." Grat book full of great cuts that inspired me to make this trick work. I just checked on the biddle trick. First time I've seen it, but it is very very similar to my trick. Mine has some differences in presentation and ending but the cuts are essentially the same.
Thanks for reading ;)
 
Nov 20, 2007
4,410
6
Sydney, Australia
So I posted this patter on an other forum but no one seems to be responding to it. I also want a wide range of opinions so I'll give T11 a try. I don't know if this effect has a name or if it has been done before. If not, then I claim this trick to be mine for I have created it HAHAHA! Oh well, that said, here it is:

Peer pressure is something that we are all familiar with. You may not believe in it, but you probably have been affected by your peers at one point in your life. Sure it might be good to fit in, but there is always a downside to it. Being like others so that you can fit in will take away from who you really are. You see, here we have a crowd.
*Show deck*
A crowd of people that may be different on the inside, but on the outside they choose to be the same so that they don’t stand out.
*Show back and front of cards from the deck*
However there is always that certain person that stands out. A person who can be picked out of a crowd of many.
*Ask spectator to give me a number*
*Remove cards off the bottom until I arrive to the given number*

Out of a crowd of many you picked this one person. It must be a special person, but what is it that makes him special? Let's find out...
*Riffle Shuffle Deck*
Here is a group of five people.
*Pick Five cards off the bottom (picked card is included in the five) Set the packet aside*
*Pick up deck*

This group of five, like the others might look different on the outside, but are the same on the inside.
*Cut deck in half showing front and back of the two cuts*
*Set deck aside, pick up packet*

Our special person is one of these five, but he is different in many ways. Unlike the others he decided to break away from common mentality and thus defeated peer pressure.
*Show group of five cards and reveal that picked card is not there anymore*
Those are the special people.
*Spread facedown deck to reveal face up picked card*
The people, who out of a crowd of many, can be easily picked out.
*Turn card facedown to reveal different color back from the rest*

Tell me a story unrelated to magic (e.g. something funny that happened, or what you did this weekend), and I'll tell you what I think about the patter.

For example, I recently became friends with a very large, very friendly Fijian dude named Ram. Being hugged by him is like being hugged by a brown bear - and I'm a rather small, rather skinny Asian dude. Actually, it was rather good times...

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Before you do, here's something I noticed in your opening lines...

"Peer pressure is something that we are all familiar with."

Ok, sure.

"You may not believe in it, but you probably have been affected by your peers at one point in your life."

...But didn't you say we are all familiar with it?

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Finally, can I take this moment to express my personal distaste for, amongst other things, counting cards from the bottom?
 
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