Normally, I would break down your video with criticisms by timestamp, but I can sum up the entire thing with only two sentences.
1. Show your face.
2. Just because you can edit doesn't mean you should.
Editing, transitions, filters, and a generic soundtrack are not a substitute for personality. There is nothing in this video to differentiate you from the thousands of other similar if not identical videos that will be posted today alone. Why settle for being one of them when you can be the best at what you do?
