I think your avatar is scary as hell.
Nah, in all seriousness, I thought the performance was good, it's clear you've put lots of practice in. If you want to make it look even better, I'd suggest;
- When you reach the display, pause. Show it off. It's called a display for a reason - so it can be displayed.
- Put more emphasis on the first two flares. That move looks awesome when done correctly, so I think if you perform it by extending your fingers further when flaring, it'd look great.
- Give the paddidle-like move a go. If you haven't, watch Andrei's SNC entry with B4 in, and you'll see what I mean. - Make sure you're flowing from one phase to the next perfectly. There's not much I can say on that topic that would be of any use to you, other than (quite obviously) the better it flows, the smoother it is.
Overall, I think you've done quite a nice job with it. A couple of minor adjustments and it'll look great.
Hope I've helped in some way.
-Sam H
P.S. Your avatar is terrifying. I'm finding it hard to sleep - it's 00:48 where I am.