I couldn't tell you if it was good or bad because I couldn't see any of what you were doing. I think that because you were trying to make the editing 'cool', we missed a LOT flourish-wise. We got to see a lot of different parts of flourishes, end results (we want to see how you got to the ending, not just the ending itself!) and some shadows.
I don't believe I saw a single complete flourish in the video. If that's what you were going for, then you did a great job, but it was really lacking for me. Showing me a part of this cut, a little bit of this cut and the ending of this cut didn't do it for me.
Cool Theory-11 like editing is just that - cool. More focus on the flourishing.
Ryan
EDIT: After watching it again, it became really obvious to me that you used the blur special effect WAY too much. The random-blackout-for-1-second special effect also got kind of annoying. There were a couple of clips with strange camera angles that just left me thinking "Why did he shoot it from this angle? I can't see anything."
