My first try!

[poonchingyip]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qCBD71kqWU

Comments and suggestions for improvement are needed, thanks.

 

[SKSleighofHand]

Nice change! No suggestions or improvements I can give you.

 

[WitchDocIsIn]

Looks pretty good to me. My suggestion is to turn down the voluime on the music in the video. Obnoxiously loud.

 

[AlexanderB]

Pretty awesome, man. But just practice it a liiitle bit more, and it will be the perfect one.

 

[poonchingyip]

Pretty awesome, man. But just practice it a liiitle bit more, an it will be the perfect one.

ok, thx man =]
And thx everyone too~