Mitchell is correct. There is no flow here. More like you are jumping from one effect to the next with no link in between.
I'm assuming this is a street performance routine you are trying to come up with?
People do like changes in magic. However, if you just keep changing from one thing to the next with no link on a street performance, people may get antsy as they have no way to gage when it will be over, and therefore they will wait uncomfortably or it to end so they don't offend you, or they will up and leave in the middle.
Now, in a paid gig, people expect change and such. However, if you approach someone on the street and you get them interested in seeing magic, they expect a trick. Not a show. I you can make the effects link, then you will keep their interest until the end.
However, to offer something constructive...
I would suggest starting off with the levitation. It will grab peoples interest. You can then go into a description of how people are able to do strange things when they put their mind to it. Perform stigmata. Say you would like to demonstrate this further. If there is someone wearing a necklace appropriate and someone has a ring, now perform Saw. You can then explain how once you are really good, you can affect things other than yourself. Perform either Indecent or Fraud. Thank them for their time.
Ditch the spongeballs all together. They don't fit with the rest of the effects. Do ya see how this has been changed from a series of effects into a routine that has a flow, a solid beginning and an end?
timft said:
Why do they have to flow people like changes, twists, turns, quickstops, corkscrews that is what magic is all about. Let me hear your routine and how they flow?
As a note, don't ask for criticism then get made when it is given
-ThrallMind