Well, I guess the closer doesn't look as nice with the beginning of the cut. Just my "two cents"
I personally like the cut, but just a tip for the future, im not saying the cut is bad because this doesnt apply to the cut. Tip: If I were you, I'd practice the cut for a LONG time, and experiment with it. What works, what flows, what doesn't work, etc.
just my extra "two cents"
Keep it up!
Eugene