nicely done, I liked it. I think an erdnase change would better suit than a cardini/ego/whateveroneyoudid because you rubbed the card in the beginning to find it, so why change it?
yeah man, i hope you dont use that patter for lay audiences, it was just hesitant. Half pass was quick. but suspicious. The card twirl was obvious, but you cant change that for camera i guess. Ego was loud, try moving your hand much much closer to the deck. Personally I think that Rev. 9 is better without the added phase. Kind of anti climatic, wouldnt you say?