hey everyone,
I know there is a big debate about teaching magic on YouTube (when they don't have permission to do so) I totally get this but I'd like to showcase the skills and tricks I have learned over the past year and 3months to YouTube just for entertainment purposes and to show family friends and people in my local area what I am really about I've just uploaded a video about 20 minutes ago I would really appreciate the support if anyone could watch
Hey Miss Magic! I'm super super happy to see more female magicians posting on here. There are truly not enough of you guys (gals?), and I hope to see more of your work in the future. I can't imagine what it's like trying to join such a male-dominated discipline/culture.
What I like about your performance is that it's all very deliberate. I don't see a lot of fumbling (though DL's can always use more practice). If it were me, I would change the handling a bit, but the overall effect is nice, and you could turn this into a great routine.
I do agree with a lot of what these other guys are saying. I think overall it just looks like you're doing moves and being very careful with the cards, throughout the routine. People may not know exactly what you're doing, but performed as it is now, they will know exactly when you're doing
something. Performing for real people will be the crux of figuring your presentation out. Yes your technique could still use some finesse, but the most important aspect of performing is controlling what your audience sees and when. Maybe you actually do better when you're performing for people, since it won't just be all eyes on the deck all the time. It's just hard to know what to think of this effect with no audience involved.
I can tell by your attitude that you're eager and able to dedicate a lot of time and effort to things--it shows. I think with further practice but especially with more performances for real people you'll gain the naturalness everyone is talking about. If you're brave enough for it, I would ask a friend to record you performing for another friend, and then watch yourself. You'll learn a lot!
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As for everyone else, in the future I recommend the "criticism sandwich." People don't respond well to direct volleys of strong criticism. They'll more than likely get defensive, think you "just don't understand" or are just trying to shut people out of your precious "art." Instead, first point out
at least one good thing about the work, show that you're truly on their side,
then offer constructive criticism (avoiding not-very-useful generalizations like "bad"), focusing on the root issues of the work--cosmetic issues usually work themselves out with time. And finally, end on a high note, encouraging the person to keep it up and let them know that with some adjustments, they will be on the right track. Good luck!