STEP - 6 Packet Display

[Kaan Ucar]

This is a card flourish-display i was playing for a short time. It's really easy and looks nice too. There are some points i'm still working on. I'm trying to make the cut (before the display) better. Do you have any advices? Please share your thoughts. (Sorry for my bad English)
[video=youtube;A6T2UhkxoIo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A6T2UhkxoIo[/video]

 

[yyyyyyy]

The sixth packet is pretty unnecessary, it's blocked so badly by your hand that it might as well not even be there. You should focus on extending the display a little more, so it's not so clumped up. Otherwise, it just looks a bit odd and bulky.

 

[Kaan Ucar]

The sixth packet is pretty unnecessary, it's blocked so badly by your hand that it might as well not even be there. You should focus on extending the display a little more, so it's not so clumped up. Otherwise, it just looks a bit odd and bulky.

Yeah, you are right, i started to editing the move. Thank you