Alright man, you asked what we thought of it, so here it goes:
Look, you flashed. I don't care what you think, you did. I noticed it first time I saw it. So please stop arguing with people who are only giving you constructive criticism. You do this on every thread where you post one of your creations. Just take the criticism, it's for you your benefit.
Okay, so I'm guessing the "modern day flair" was the cut that controlled the card at the beginning? I would work on it, as it was too slow and obvious to follow. But good start. Just smooth it out.
The effect itself is obviously good. But here's the thing. I've noticed in every video you've posted, you card handling skills aren't very good. I would say stop trying to create your own effects. Go back and start learning basics in card magic, and learning moves and effects already created. THEN you can start creating your own effects.
The problem is your spending too much time trying to create effects, and not working enough on your card handling skills.
Hope this helps you man! Keep at it and you'll be great someday!
Cheers