J+S got my vote, and here's why. His performance was smooth and natural, with a simple video. Yours had annoying music (in my opinion) about bars and drinking and being paralyzed which detracted from the effect, as well as very unnatural moves. You also trademarked the title. This begs "Why?". Also, no one cares if a DL was used or not. A DL is great if it adds to the effect. It would've been 10x as natural if you'd used a solid DL.
Ian