I voted for the other guy. Whilst I recognize that your routine was more complex and some of the ideas behind the effects were very good, the execution let it down. Just looked like it needed a bit more practice, whereas the slipshot was flawless.
I voted for theJoo as well
his was simple and straightforward, which is my style.
Nice try though.
Just work on the execution and make it flow well.
Love the karnivals though.