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[krazykards]

just wanted some feedback if it looks good and if its somewhat original

the video is password protected b/c its a practice vid and i dont want random peeps to find it since it is far from perfect.

Also, READ THE DESCRIPTION ON THE VIDEO! and I dont claim to be good at the DPS at all it was just for reference for my idea

http://vimeo.com/6410842

password: Jerry Andrus

 

[MagicSanj]

First of all, in your video make sure you label which move is which, because I can't refer to the name of the move then (when giving feedback).

With that in mind, the first DPS (or PGC?) needed work, looked very unnatural, yet as the video progressed it seemed to get better and better, until the last one was very very smooth and could easily be played off as perfect (spectators wouldn't notice a thing) in a performance, so congrats on that.

If you can consistently hit that last DPS (or PGC?) I think your technical work is complete, now you just have to keep practicing that move to get it faster.

Keep it up,

-Sanj

 

[krazykards]

thanx for the feedback but READ WHAT I WROTE both here and on the vid itself....

 

[krazykards]

so here's an update vid using the move as a holdout during spectator shuffling...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4h4fCYuoG3E