The only two good things in your video were the crystal clear image and your technique. As adjones put it: it was boring. It wasn't a magical experience, it was just a trick. By the posts on this thread and the usual attitude towards magic amongst youth, I am very worried about the future of magic. Everybody is doing the same tricks with robotic non-interesting patter (which I wouldn't even want to call patter), with no stories or emotional hooks.
But hey lets just all call ourselves artists, and continue doing tricks and practicing to make the pass invisible for a webcam.